關於Crayola的意思和用法的提問

A: × We went to Crayola Experience with my Japanese friend, Mika's family today.
✓ We went to Crayola Experience with my Japanese friend Mika and her family today.

× My kids and her kids belong to same Japanese language school in NJ.
✓ Our kids go to the same Japanese language school in NJ.

× They have a school on online on Sunday because of pandemic.
✓ They go to school online on Sundays because of the pandemic.

× She lives in a place where takes more than an hour drive from here, but she invited us to a play date to go there.
✓ She lives lives over an hour away, but she invited us on a play date to Crayola Experience.

× Crayola Experience is very close to my house and we have annual passes.
✓ (Crayola Experience is very close to my house, and we have annual passes).

× There are no Japanese kids around here so it was for the first time for my kids to have a play date with Japanese kids.
✓ There are no other Japanese kids around here, so it was the first time my kids had a play date with Japanese kids.

× So my kids were so excited, especially my daughter.
✓ My kids were so excited--especially my daughter.

× After moving to the US, she became shy.
✓ After moving to the US, she became shy

× Because she is still not good at speaking English.
✓ because she doesn't speak English well.

× But today, she could talk with Mika's daughter in Japanese.
✓ But today, she was able talk with Mika's daughter in Japanese,

× She looked very happy and was much more active than usual.
✓ so she looked very happy and was much more active than usual.

× I was glad to see her smile and at the same time I felt very sorry for her.
✓ I was glad to see her smile, but at the same time I felt very sorry for her.

× I hope she have such fun playing with American children.
✓ I hope that someday she will have this much fun playing with American children.

A: × She has a son and he is three years old, same age with my youngest son.
✓ She has a 3 year old son who is the same age as my youngest son.

× So we can hung out well.
✓ So they got along well.

× Luckily, he started taking a nap in the car on our way home.
✓ My son fell asleep in the car on our way home.

× He kept sleeping after we got home.
✓ He was still sleeping even after we got home.

× It is unusual for him to take a nap.
✓ It was unusual for him to take a nap.

× So I could get my free time until other my kids came home from their school.
✓ But anyway I got some free time until my other kids came home from their school.

× During that time, I could study English with HiNative.
✓ During that time, I studied English with HiNative.

× I knew about this app recently and it is very useful for me.
✓ I got to know about this app recently and it is very useful for me.

You could also say:

Today, I went to the Crayola Experience with a friend. She has a three-year-old son, the same age as my youngest son. As a result, we can hang out well. We have annual passes, so we go there frequently. As usual, we had a great time. Fortunately, he began napping in the car on the way home. He continued to sleep after we returned home. It is unusual for him to sleep. So I could have some free time until the rest of my kids got home from school. I was able to study English with HiNative at the time. This app was introduced to me recently, and it has proven to be extremely useful.