關於Odakyu的意思和用法的提問
"Odakyu"有關的其他問題
Q:
"When I got to Odakyu Shinjuku station, I was told that all the trains wouldn't go to Machida because there was an accident. I was really devastated. I quickly learned how to get to Tokaichiba station, using other lines. When I got to college, it had already been past 8:00. I hurried to prepare for my classes. "
Hello . Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you.
Hello . Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you.
A:
Overall, the sentences in your example sound natural and convey a clear sequence of events. However, there are a few minor changes that could be made to improve the clarity and flow of the writing: look!
"When I arrived at Odakyu Shinjuku station, I was informed that all trains to Machida were cancelled due to an accident. I felt devastated, but quickly learned how to reach Tokaichiba station using other lines. By the time I reached college, it was already past 8:00, so I hurried to prepare for my classes."
In your text, I made a few changes to improve the flow and clarity of the writing. Specifically:
- I changed "got to" to "arrived at" to provide a more precise and formal description of the speaker's arrival at the station.
- I clarified that all trains to Machida were cancelled due to an accident, rather than simply saying that the trains "wouldn't go" to Machida.
- I added a phrase to indicate that the speaker learned how to reach Tokaichiba station using other lines, which helps to explain how the speaker was able to continue their journey despite the cancelled trains.
- I combined the last two sentences into one to create a smoother transition between the speaker's arrival at college and their preparation for classes.
"When I arrived at Odakyu Shinjuku station, I was informed that all trains to Machida were cancelled due to an accident. I felt devastated, but quickly learned how to reach Tokaichiba station using other lines. By the time I reached college, it was already past 8:00, so I hurried to prepare for my classes."
In your text, I made a few changes to improve the flow and clarity of the writing. Specifically:
- I changed "got to" to "arrived at" to provide a more precise and formal description of the speaker's arrival at the station.
- I clarified that all trains to Machida were cancelled due to an accident, rather than simply saying that the trains "wouldn't go" to Machida.
- I added a phrase to indicate that the speaker learned how to reach Tokaichiba station using other lines, which helps to explain how the speaker was able to continue their journey despite the cancelled trains.
- I combined the last two sentences into one to create a smoother transition between the speaker's arrival at college and their preparation for classes.
Q:
I changed Odakyu line at Shinjuku station. I'm little surprised because there were not almost people at Shinjuku station. 聼起來自然嗎?
A:
I transferred to Odakyu line at Shinjuku Station. I'm a little surprised that there was almost no one at Shinjuku Station.
Q:
I'm furious at Odakyu line because there was an accident yet again.
Odakyu line is exactly the worst train line of delay!! 聼起來自然嗎?
Odakyu line is exactly the worst train line of delay!! 聼起來自然嗎?
A:
" Im extremely furious because there was an accident at odakyu line which has the slowest delay time for trains "
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