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Q: As I get older, I feel the adage that time flies like an arrow close to me. This July, I'll finally 42. Damn… hope it’ll be the last of my unlucky year. (in Japanese, we call it Yakudoshi.)

Mustering all of my strength to climb up the mountain, bracing myself to chop down a significant number of trees all day long.

Some people say it's a great job because you can work while being lit up by sunlight filtering through among trees, breathing in the fresh air.

The fresh air? Ha, you'd always inhale the powder of the tree, and it'd damage your lungs.

Besides, working as a lumberjack is a long battle with an unpredictable accident.

Last year I got injured in my right knee and it took me about a month to recover from that injury.

My right leg had been fixed in the cast for a week at that time. My daughter always looked at me with a dubious and scary look on her face as if she looked at the uncoordinated robot.

Hope it will be a great year this year for sure. 聼起來自然嗎?
A: × As I get older, I feel the adage that time flies like an arrow close to me.
✓ As I get older, the more I relate to the adage that time flies like an arrow.

× This July, I'll finally 42.
✓ This July, I'll finally turn 42.

× Damn… hope it’ll be the last of my unlucky year.
✓ Damn… hope it’ll be the last of my unlucky years.

× Mustering all of my strength to climb up the mountain, bracing myself to chop down a significant number of trees all day long.
✓ Mustering all of my strength to climb up the mountain, I brace myself for cutting down a lot of trees all day long. ("chopping" is fine, it's just that this sounds serious and "to chop" is mostly used in less serious contexts.)

× Some people say it's a great job because you can work while being lit up by sunlight filtering through among trees, breathing in the fresh air.
✓ Some people say it's a great job because you can work under the sunlight filtering through the trees, like falling stars, breathing in the fresh air.

× The fresh air?
✓ Fresh air?

× Ha, you'd always inhale the powder of the tree, and it'd damage your lungs.
✓ Ha, more like inhaling the powder of trees (or just "sawdust") and damaging your lungs.

× Besides, working as a lumberjack is a long battle with an unpredictable accident.
✓ Besides, working as a lumberjack is an unending battle with unpredictable accidents.

× Last year I got injured in my right knee and it took me about a month to recover from that injury.
✓ Last year, I injured my right knee and it took me about a month to recover from it.

× My right leg had been fixed in the cast for a week at that time.
✓ My right leg was in the cast for a week at that time.

× My daughter always looked at me with a dubious and scary look on her face as if she looked at the uncoordinated robot.
✓ My daughter always had a dubious and scary look on her face whenever she looked at me, as if she was looking at an uncoordinated robot.

× Hope it will be a great year this year for sure.
✓ Hopefully, it will be a great year this year.

I am not sure what you mean by a "dubious and scary look" on your daughter's face. Was she scared of you or for you? If she was scared for you, then maybe change it to "complicated and concerned look". Hope this helps!

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