關於Azalea的意思和用法的提問

A: × I trimmed azaleas in baking outside
✓ I trimmed (the) azaleas in the baking sun. // I trimmed the azaleas in the hot outdoors.

Were you trying to use the idiom "in the baking sun"?

A: × There are many azaleas blooming after the season of cherry blossom.and then It’s a beautiful greenery.
✓ Many azaleas bloom after the cherry blossom season, followed by beautiful greenery.

× Many people visit to the park is close to my house in middle of may every year,because of it’s famous for many kind of rose.
✓ Many people visit the park close to my house in the middle of May every year, because it is famous for having many different kinds of roses.

I would probably change the second “Many” to “A lot of”, as stylistically it is better not to repeat words in English if possible (unless it is done deliberately for literary effect or emphasis).