關於Gmos的意思和用法的提問

A: × I believe that using genetically modified crops is beneficial for human society overall.
✓ I believe that using genetically modified crops are beneficial for human society.

× Here are the reasons why I think so.
✓ Here are the reasons. (It sounded informal so I excluded "why I think so")

× First of all, the GMOs will be helpful for the deficiency of foods around the world.
✓ First of all, the GMOs will be helpful for the deficiency of foods all around the world.

× According to experts, agricultural production we need will increase over 70% in the future.
✓ According to the experts, agricultural production will increase over 70% in the future.

× GMOs can help address the problem with genetic engineering to improve crop yields.
✓ Which is why, GMOs can help to address the problem with genetic engineering to improve crop yields and solve problems that were stated above.

× Secondly, GMOs have been proven safe through testing and use.
✓ Secondly, GMOs have been proven safe through strict testings.

× Over 2000 global studies have affirmed the safety of GM crops.
✓ Over 2000 global studies have affirmed the safety of GMOs crops.

× What is more, GM crops can reduce natural toxins, making them safer and healthier.
✓ Furthermore, GMOs crops can reduce natural toxins, making them safer and healthier.

× Lastly, by reducing pesticide use, GM crops have good effects on the environmental issues.
✓ Lastly, by reducing pesticide use, GMOs crops have good effects on the environmental issues.

× Genetically modified, insect-protected crops have achieved significant environmental benefits by reducing pesticide use and greenhouse gas emissions.
✓ Genetically modified, insect-protected crops have achieved significant environmental benefits by reducing use of pesticides and greenhouse gas emissions.

× For the reasons mentioned above, banning genetically modified crops has not make a sense.
✓ For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that banning genetically modified crops sounds like an allegation. ( It sounds very informal so I changed it)

× As its safety is already guaranteed, the use of genetically modified crops is both necessary and justifiable.
✓ As its safety is already guaranteed, the use of genetically modified crops are both necessary and justifiable.

A: × GMOs are easier to harvest, so farms can save money on labor, thus in turn resulting in cheaper crops.
✓ GMOs are easier to harvest, so farms can save money on labor, (thus/in turn) resulting in cheaper crops.

You can use either 'thus' or 'in turn' here but not both since it sounds repetitive. Otherwise the sentence is good.

A: Maybe you could add the word "more" between a and stable, but otherwise it is 完璧 👍