關於Hijiyama的意思和用法的提問

A: × The Hijiyama park in Hiroshima is a 71m-high forested quiet mountain.
✓ The Hijiyama park in Hiroshima is a 71m-high, forested, quiet mountain.

× There are the art museum and the manga library and parks with outdoor sculptures.
✓ There is an art museum, a manga library, and parks with outdoor sculptures.

A: × Hijiyama park in Hiroshima is a 71m-high forested quiet mountain.
✓ Hijiyama park in Hiroshima is located on a quiet forested mountain 71m-high.

× There are the art museum and the manga library and parks with outdoor sculptures.
✓ There is an art museum, a manga library, and parks with outdoor sculptures.

× It has become a place of rest for the citizens.
✓ It has become a place of rest for the citizens of Hiroshima.

× However, it is sad to say that new residents, myself included, don't know so much about the US-Japan Radiation Effects Research Foundation, which is still in the central area to continuously study Atomic bomb radiation effects.
✓ Unfortunately, more recent residents such as myself do not know much about the US-Japan Radiation Effects Research Foundation, which remains in the area to continuously study the effects of radiation from the atomic bomb.