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Can samebody check my work?
I am writing to complain anout last Ira concert , which took place last weekend, 25th April 2018y. in Opole. I would like to suggest why the concert was failure. My rasons for suggesting organizaors was wrong to do this concert.Firstly, there was insufficent for toiled. Queue was really big and we must waiting for long time. That was the reasons for my being late for the concert. Secondly sound was absolutly bad and sometimes we did not heard musisc and singers. Thirdly there was too many people. I could not stand, becouse evryone want turn me over and crush me. The solutions I would sugest that organizers will choose better place, for example congress hall or theatre. If it will be impossible organizers should change aound. Secondly you must adjust the number of people to the size of the place, becouse it is not comfortable, when somone want crush you. Last organizers should provide the conert plase with more toilets. I do belive that my suggest will help organize better concert. I hope you will consider my complain. I look forword to hearind form you . Yours sincerely