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× This is my first townhall in this company since I joined this company at Agustus.
✓ This is my first townhall meeting with this company since I joined it in August.
× Being a part of xxxx gave me an experience that I never expected before, in this company I feel the good that is generated directly and has a direct impact on many people.
✓ Being a part of xxxx gave me an experience that I never had before. In this company I feel the good that is generated, and its direct impact on many people.
× The kindness is not only come from friends but comes from the others out there that turn out to be real.
✓ The kindness generated comes not only from my friends, but also from others.
× Hopefully, next year will more kindness that could be share~ thank you
✓ Hopefully, next year will continue to bring more kindness that can be shared. Thank you.