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2016年10月13日
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英語 (美國)
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日語
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中文 (繁體，香港)
有關 英語 (美國) 的問題
While we walk into the foggy forest，
Into the air that is cold and wet ，
Meet the tallest tree be named "The moon hit the tree"
Only with you can do so,
In thin thick mist and with crazy heartbeat．
Only with you can do so, Realize that is how extensive love．
Like the original squirrel collision．
Like a gentle cat flighty．
聼起來自然嗎?
While we walk into the foggy forest，
Into the air that is cold and wet ，
Meet the tallest tree be named "The moon hit the tree"
Only with you can do so,
In thin thick mist and with crazy heartbeat．
Only with you can do so, Realize that is how extensive love．
Like the original squirrel collision．
Like a gentle cat flighty．
聼起來自然嗎?
Into the air that is cold and wet ，
Meet the tallest tree be named "The moon hit the tree"
Only with you can do so,
In thin thick mist and with crazy heartbeat．
Only with you can do so, Realize that is how extensive love．
Like the original squirrel collision．
Like a gentle cat flighty．
聼起來自然嗎?
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
The last two sentences are a bit confusing, not exactly sure what you're trying to say but the rest is beautiful
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
The end has some conventional error, but otherwise, pretty good!
- 英語 (美國)
- 西班牙語 (智利) 接近流利
有點不自然
Meet the tallest tree be named "The moon hit the tree" seems a bit incoherent
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
You have a very good understanding of sound. The rhythm of your sentences are beautiful, but as some mentioned, certain phrases do not make sense. I recommend reading Paradise Lost by John Milton, it is a difficult book, and even though you may not understand most of the words, observe the rhythm of his lines. I think with practice you can become a good writer.
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