Dear native speakers! Please, check lyrics of my next song. Is it queit good for English songs? The fact is that i have a ready melody for my song, so i have to observe limited number of syllables. Maybe there're some problems, grammatic mistakes, please tell your opinion: How many times did you suspect? Hide a crime behind the innocence Did you feel flames of toxic hate? Looked for an escape. A sudden ache. Your soul was choked and got a twitch Turn off the head. There is no switch. How many words had no effect? Don't try to be the racing rat We are waiting for the start to dream again We've never stayed at silent bays Would prefer the storm to sunny days Tin heart pumps oil into your veins Gives reason not to keep the strain How many times did you betray? Every day give hopes, but just pretend How many strangers on this way? You'll meet before to watch the end Let star Keep shining! Wash away every fear tonight! Let's crowd! Keep moving! We wait for a day that we will start to dream again