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NOV 18 2016(Fry)
I did two part-time jobs today. One is the work of the inventory of the convenience store, the other is the work of the teacher of the cram school. In the cram school, there is a girl who want to pass the university where I belong to. To be frank,she isn't so smart,but I think that she tries it hard than which student going to the cram school. Therefore I think that I want her to succeed. For last three months,I intend to support her seriously.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
NOV 18 2016(Fry)
I did two part-time jobs today. One is the work of the inventory of the convenience store, the other is the work of the teacher of the cram school. In the cram school, there is a girl who want to pass the university where I belong to. To be frank,she isn't so smart,but I think that she tries it hard than which student going to the cram school. Therefore I think that I want her to succeed. For last three months,I intend to support her seriously.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
I did two part-time jobs today. One is the work of the inventory of the convenience store, the other is the work of the teacher of the cram school. In the cram school, there is a girl who want to pass the university where I belong to. To be frank,she isn't so smart,but I think that she tries it hard than which student going to the cram school. Therefore I think that I want her to succeed. For last three months,I intend to support her seriously.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
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@takuya111 I think this should be better:
NOV 18 2016(Fri)
I did two part-time jobs today. One is doing inventory at a convenience store and the other is being a teacher at a cram school. In the cram school, there is a girl who wants to enter the university where I belong to. To be frank, she isn't so smart, but I think that she tries harder than any student going to the cram school. Therefore I think that I want her to succeed. For the last three months, I intend to support her seriously.
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I would write:
NOV 18th 2016 (Fri)
I did two part-time jobs today.
The first job was doing inventory work at a convenience store, the other is teaching at a cram school.
In the cram school, there is a girl who wants to pass the university (entrance exam?) for the university I am a member of.
To be frank, she isn't very smart, but I think that she tries very hard compared to the other students in the cram class.
Therefore I think that I want her to succeed. For last three months, I intend to support her as much as possible.
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