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NOV 19.2016(Sat)
Today,I read the book whose title is”to be born once again”.This book is the Japanese novel which a writer called Ryo Asai who l respect the most.There are five main characters in this book.The same situation is written by the viewpoint of verious characters,and feeling and problem that each character has are descrived in this book carefully.I think that Ryo Asai is the genius who can operate words freely.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
NOV 19.2016(Sat)
Today,I read the book whose title is”to be born once again”.This book is the Japanese novel which a writer called Ryo Asai who l respect the most.There are five main characters in this book.The same situation is written by the viewpoint of verious characters,and feeling and problem that each character has are descrived in this book carefully.I think that Ryo Asai is the genius who can operate words freely.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
Today,I read the book whose title is”to be born once again”.This book is the Japanese novel which a writer called Ryo Asai who l respect the most.There are five main characters in this book.The same situation is written by the viewpoint of verious characters,and feeling and problem that each character has are descrived in this book carefully.I think that Ryo Asai is the genius who can operate words freely.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate explession.
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"NOV 19.2016(Sat)
Today, I read a book called"To Be Born Once Again”. This book is a Japanese novel written by Ryo Asai, who l respect greatly. There are five main characters in this book who experience the same situation. The book is written by the viewpoint of various characters that describes their emotions to the problems that arise. I think that Ryo Asai is the genius who can operate words in an artistic way."
I have not read this book so I'm sorry if I edited your work to not follow the story. You can just say if I did and I will try and correct it.
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Today, I read a book called To Be Born Once Again. This book is a Japanese novel written by an author who I greatly respect, Ryo Asai. The same situation is written from the viewpoints of various characters, and the feelings and problems that each character has are described carefully in the book. I think that Ryo Asai is a genius who uses words freely.
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Nov 19th 2016 (Sat)
Today I read a book by the Japanese novelist, Ryo Asai, entitled "To be born once again." I hold him in extremely high esteem, because he's a genius with words. This book features five main characters who are experiencing the same situation. Asai creatively weaves his tale from the unique point of view of each character. He expertly describes the emotions and problems they mush each work through. (I suggest you end with some emotion the novel allowed you to feel)
I know I changed a few things but that's to make it flow. Hope this was helpful. I feel I want to read this book too 😆😊
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@Selinaaa: thank you very much! u don't need to say sorry! your advice is useful for me. thank you〜！
@Selinaaa: thank you very much! u don't need to say sorry! your advice is useful for me. thank you〜！
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@Amarantha: thank you!
I didn't know how to
make sentences flow because i'm foreigner. SO,your advice is valuable for me. thank you!
and please read this book if you get a chance! haha
I didn't know how to
make sentences flow because i'm foreigner. SO,your advice is valuable for me. thank you!
and please read this book if you get a chance! haha
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@takuya111 I would write:
Nov 19th 2016 (Sat)
Today, I read a book titled ”to be born once again”.
This book is written by Japanese novelist Ryo Asai who l respect very much.
There are five main characters in this book.
The same situation is described from the viewpoint of the various characters, expressing their feelings and situations they encounter in fine detail.
I think that Ryo Asai is a genius who can manipulate words with mastery.
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I cannot thank you enough😭😭
your answers make me strong,and bring me close to my dream !!!
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I cannot thank you enough😭😭
your answers make me strong,and bring me close to my dream !!!
thank you〜/🎉💕
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