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Xiaoyu0
2016年12月7日

  • 中文 (簡體)
  • 英語 (美國)
  • 西班牙語 (西班牙)
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It gives us an access to a life of high-quality and makes us feel substantial. 聼起來自然嗎?

If it's not natural, please tell me the natural way to say this. Thanks!
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michelle3294
2016年12月7日

  • 印尼語

有點不自然

it gives us an access to a high-quality life (or you can say lifestyle) that makes us feel (......)

sorry, I don't really get what you mean by substantial 😢 I don't think it's a common term to use for expressing feelings :)

I'm not a native, though. 😁

s0upx0n
2016年12月7日

  • 英語 (美國)

自然

"An access" is singular but "us" is plural.

I think "high-quality" is an adjective (which doesn't fit) but "high quality" would fit (as a noun).

I've heard of people being described as "substantial", so I think that is fine (though a little uncommon).

"It gives us access to a life of high quality and makes us feel substantial"

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Xiaoyu0
2016年12月8日

  • 中文 (簡體)
Can I use meaningful or fulfilling as alternative of substantial? Is it more common? @s0upx0n
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s0upx0n
2016年12月8日

  • 英語 (美國)

自然

Yep, those two are both more common and could work, perhaps something like:
"It gives us access to a meaningful/fulfilling life of high quality"

I think there is a little difference between the words:
"Fulfilling" = you feel good about it
"Meaningful" = someone thinks it is important
"Substantial" = large physical change

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Xiaoyu0
2016年12月8日

  • 中文 (簡體)
Thank you! @s0upx0n
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