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The JR EAST Morioka branch, where I was working seven years ago, invited me to talk about our high-speed railway project in India. They listened to my lecture sincerely, and I asked them to work with us in India and to create the first bullet train together.
Next day, I visited Kamaishi, where the world cup of rugby football will be held this year.
Many fans of rugby visited there to watch the game, Japan vs. Fiji. The Japanese national team called brave blossoms holds a game for the first time there. Kamaishi suffered huge damage by TSUNAMI, at the time of the great earthquake 2011, but the town is vigorous today. 聼起來自然嗎?
The JR EAST Morioka branch, where I was working seven years ago, invited me to talk about our high-speed railway project in India. They listened to my lecture sincerely, and I asked them to work with us in India and to create the first bullet train together.
Next day, I visited Kamaishi, where the world cup of rugby football will be held this year.
Many fans of rugby visited there to watch the game, Japan vs. Fiji. The Japanese national team called brave blossoms holds a game for the first time there. Kamaishi suffered huge damage by TSUNAMI, at the time of the great earthquake 2011, but the town is vigorous today. 聼起來自然嗎?
Next day, I visited Kamaishi, where the world cup of rugby football will be held this year.
Many fans of rugby visited there to watch the game, Japan vs. Fiji. The Japanese national team called brave blossoms holds a game for the first time there. Kamaishi suffered huge damage by TSUNAMI, at the time of the great earthquake 2011, but the town is vigorous today. 聼起來自然嗎?
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“The JR EAST Morioka branch, where I was working seven years ago, invited me to talk about our high-speed railway project in India. They listened to my lecture sincerely, and I asked them to work with us to create the first bullet train there (<- this refers to India). The next day, I visited Kamaishi, which will be one of the venues for the upcoming Rugby World Cup this year (September). Many rugby fans came out to watch Japan vs. Fiji in the opening game of the Pacific Nations Cup. The Japanese national team called the Brave Blossoms was holding a game for the first time there. Kamaishi had suffered huge damage from the tsunami that followed the great earthquake of 2011, but the town is thriving today.”
After doing some research on World Rugby tournaments, I added some clarification because I didn’t know if the game you mentioned (which took place less than 12 hours ago as of this writing) was part of the World Cup.
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“The JR EAST Morioka branch, where I was working seven years ago, invited me to talk about our high-speed railway project in India. They listened to my lecture sincerely, and I asked them to work with us to create the first bullet train there (<- this refers to India). The next day, I visited Kamaishi, which will be one of the venues for the upcoming Rugby World Cup this year (September). Many rugby fans came out to watch Japan vs. Fiji in the opening game of the Pacific Nations Cup. The Japanese national team called the Brave Blossoms was holding a game for the first time there. Kamaishi had suffered huge damage from the tsunami that followed the great earthquake of 2011, but the town is thriving today.”
After doing some research on World Rugby tournaments, I added some clarification because I didn’t know if the game you mentioned (which took place less than 12 hours ago as of this writing) was part of the World Cup.
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I would change 'where I was working' to 'where I worked'. Other than that, @butterworth1885 's suggested corrections look good.
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