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Please help me to check this IELTS writing task 2, thank u so much. This is the topic: Some people asy that the main environmental, problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
And this is my composition:
Human beings are facing serious environmental problems nowadays. For some people, biological issues like the distinction of some certain kinds of living things is vital. But others think that is not the most important. In my opinion, every aspect of environmental problem is serious nowadays.
In fact, species are fading every minute, even without human. The extinction of creatures is a natural porcess. But since the Industrial Revolution had begun, the process has been speed up. Because of the booming population, habitats of animals and plants are decreasing and decreasing... So, there are little doubts that creatures' extinction is a serious problem today.
Please help me to check this IELTS writing task 2, thank u so much. This is the topic: Some people asy that the main environmental, problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
And this is my composition:
Human beings are facing serious environmental problems nowadays. For some people, biological issues like the distinction of some certain kinds of living things is vital. But others think that is not the most important. In my opinion, every aspect of environmental problem is serious nowadays.
In fact, species are fading every minute, even without human. The extinction of creatures is a natural porcess. But since the Industrial Revolution had begun, the process has been speed up. Because of the booming population, habitats of animals and plants are decreasing and decreasing... So, there are little doubts that creatures' extinction is a serious problem today.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
And this is my composition:
Human beings are facing serious environmental problems nowadays. For some people, biological issues like the distinction of some certain kinds of living things is vital. But others think that is not the most important. In my opinion, every aspect of environmental problem is serious nowadays.
In fact, species are fading every minute, even without human. The extinction of creatures is a natural porcess. But since the Industrial Revolution had begun, the process has been speed up. Because of the booming population, habitats of animals and plants are decreasing and decreasing... So, there are little doubts that creatures' extinction is a serious problem today.
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Environmental problems that we are facing today are not only the biological extinction, but more problems like air pollution, water pollution, holes in the ozone layer of our atmosphere and so on. We human have distributed lots of harmful elements to our Earth so that varies of ecologic problems place in front of us.
In my view, every kinds of environmental problem is what we should concern about in today's world. Every patterns of Earth's environment is a vital part to maintain the ecologic balance of the Earth. For example, the food chain. The food chain ensures tne amount of creatures could keep in a resonable range. Once a part of the chain have been broken down, the whole chain would dissapeared. Also, our environment is a chian too. To protect it, we should not ignore any part of the environment.
All in all, both the loss of species of creatures and other environmental problems are severe, and it is our duty to solve them now.
In my view, every kinds of environmental problem is what we should concern about in today's world. Every patterns of Earth's environment is a vital part to maintain the ecologic balance of the Earth. For example, the food chain. The food chain ensures tne amount of creatures could keep in a resonable range. Once a part of the chain have been broken down, the whole chain would dissapeared. Also, our environment is a chian too. To protect it, we should not ignore any part of the environment.
All in all, both the loss of species of creatures and other environmental problems are severe, and it is our duty to solve them now.
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Btw, it requires at least 250 words. Please help me to check whether the grammar of this essay is correct, the spelling of words, and whether it is relevant to the topic. Thanks guys!😜
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made a few changes .....
Please help me to check this IELTS writing task 2, thank u so much. This is the topic: Some people asy (say) that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
And this is my composition:
Human beings are facing serious environmental problems nowadays. For some people, biological issues like the extinction of certain kinds of living things is a major concern . But others think that is not the most important. In my opinion, every aspect of environmental problems is serious nowadays.
In fact, species are fading every minute, even without human ( human what?). The extinction of creatures is a natural process. But since the Industrial Revolution, the process has speeded up. Because of the booming population, habitats of animals and plants are rapidly decreasing, So there is little doubt that extinction of species is a serious problem today.
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