I have to use frequency adverbs.
Ana is a university student. Because of her lessons, she always has to get up before seven o'clock in the morning. She'd rather Cook something fast for breakfast like eggs in order not to lose time. She always studies English as she is majoring in foreing languages and English is the main language in this project. Ana said that she never writes emails because she doesn't have whom write to. She often plays sport like volleyball and basketball. Also Ana often eats fruit since she loves grapes, apples and pears. She doesn't play computer games due to her bad computer. She often arrives at class early because she wakes up early in the morning as well. Of course, Ana always uses the Internet for everything since she needs to comunicate and investigate. She always goes out in the evening as she prints her homework at this time. She hardly ever does the housework since her mother does it. Ana always listens to music because she likes listening to music on the bus or the way home. 聼起來自然嗎?

I have to use frequency adverbs.
Ana is a university student. Because of her lessons, she always has to get up before seven o'clock in the morning. She'd rather cook something fast for breakfast (like eggs) in order to not lose time. She always studies English, as she is majoring in foreing languages. English is the main language in this project. Ana said that she never writes emails because she doesn't have anyone write to. She often plays sports like volleyball and basketball. Ana often eats fruit since she loves grapes, apples and pears. She doesn't play computer games due to her bad computer. She often arrives to class early because she wakes up early in the morning. Of course, Ana always uses the Internet for everything since she needs to comunicate and investigate. She always goes out in the evening, because she prints her homework then. She hardly ever does the housework since her mother does it for her. Ana always listens to music because she likes to listen to music on the bus or her way home.

For the most part this was very fluent. There were very few grammatical errors. The most common ones I found were run-on sentences. Some other things I found was just an excess amount of words. I changed everything I thought would sound better and more fluent. Aside from those few problems I thought it was very good!