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We are living in an aging society. The number of elderly people is increasing these days. So I believe that fewer Japanese consumers will buy imported products in the future.
Firstly, it will be hard to sell imported products in Japan because some elderly people are not familiar with them. They think that food they eat every day is important to live longer. Some of them may consider that Japanese food's quality is better than imported products. It is too good to stop eating such Japanese food.
Also, it is not good for economy. It costs us a lot of money to import products. We have to use ships and planes to transport them to Japan. Imported product’s price includes extra money for the transportation. No one likes high-price products.
For these reasons, Japanese consumers will buy much more Japanese products than imported products in the future. 聼起來自然嗎?
We are living in an aging society. The number of elderly people is increasing these days. So I believe that fewer Japanese consumers will buy imported products in the future.
Firstly, it will be hard to sell imported products in Japan because some elderly people are not familiar with them. They think that food they eat every day is important to live longer. Some of them may consider that Japanese food's quality is better than imported products. It is too good to stop eating such Japanese food.
Also, it is not good for economy. It costs us a lot of money to import products. We have to use ships and planes to transport them to Japan. Imported product’s price includes extra money for the transportation. No one likes high-price products.
For these reasons, Japanese consumers will buy much more Japanese products than imported products in the future. 聼起來自然嗎?
Firstly, it will be hard to sell imported products in Japan because some elderly people are not familiar with them. They think that food they eat every day is important to live longer. Some of them may consider that Japanese food's quality is better than imported products. It is too good to stop eating such Japanese food.
Also, it is not good for economy. It costs us a lot of money to import products. We have to use ships and planes to transport them to Japan. Imported product’s price includes extra money for the transportation. No one likes high-price products.
For these reasons, Japanese consumers will buy much more Japanese products than imported products in the future. 聼起來自然嗎?
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It’s very good! The only thing I would possibly change at the end of the first paragraph is to take out the “I believe” part and just start that sentence with “Fewer Japanese ....” Either way it sounds natural though. 👍
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Very well written and very clear to understand!! Good job!
- 英語 (美國)
自然
It’s very good! The only thing I would possibly change at the end of the first paragraph is to take out the “I believe” part and just start that sentence with “Fewer Japanese ....” Either way it sounds natural though. 👍

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