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I write an essay every day, but I'm not sure it is correct or not.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are some mistakes.
Thank you:)
What is your idea of perfect happiness?
My idea of perfect happiness is everyone can feel " I'm happy". It's very simple, but these days many people consider them, I'm unhappy, there is no reason why I survive like my childhood. I couldn't figure out what the purpose of my life, but my mind has changed. I always feel that I'm happy even if it is the worst day in my entire life. That sound doesn't make sense, but it is important to believe "I'm happy. If I do that, my feeling get much better. It took a long time to change my mind, however, if everyone on the earth can feel "I'm happy, even though they don't have enough money, many friends or other things, the world would change to more great. I bet some people say "you are exaggerating, but I believe it, then I hope the world will he better.
I write an essay every day, but I'm not sure it is correct or not.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are some mistakes.
Thank you:)
What is your idea of perfect happiness?
My idea of perfect happiness is everyone can feel " I'm happy". It's very simple, but these days many people consider them, I'm unhappy, there is no reason why I survive like my childhood. I couldn't figure out what the purpose of my life, but my mind has changed. I always feel that I'm happy even if it is the worst day in my entire life. That sound doesn't make sense, but it is important to believe "I'm happy. If I do that, my feeling get much better. It took a long time to change my mind, however, if everyone on the earth can feel "I'm happy, even though they don't have enough money, many friends or other things, the world would change to more great. I bet some people say "you are exaggerating, but I believe it, then I hope the world will he better.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are some mistakes.
Thank you:)
What is your idea of perfect happiness?
My idea of perfect happiness is everyone can feel " I'm happy". It's very simple, but these days many people consider them, I'm unhappy, there is no reason why I survive like my childhood. I couldn't figure out what the purpose of my life, but my mind has changed. I always feel that I'm happy even if it is the worst day in my entire life. That sound doesn't make sense, but it is important to believe "I'm happy. If I do that, my feeling get much better. It took a long time to change my mind, however, if everyone on the earth can feel "I'm happy, even though they don't have enough money, many friends or other things, the world would change to more great. I bet some people say "you are exaggerating, but I believe it, then I hope the world will he better.
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My idea of absolute happiness is the wonder to the aspect. Everyone can one day say “I’m happy.” I seems so simple, but these days, many people feel otherwise. “What is my purpose for living. Why should I feel it the same as I once did when I was a carless child.” Once a purpose was far beyond reach, but as time has passed I believe my mind has changed. I have gained happiness in the worst days of my life. It seems senseless but I believe it is important to tell yourself, “I’m happy”, regardless. When I look at life that way I begin to feel different. Like I was finally, truly happy. It’s not the money in your pocket, or the people your feel you need, and especially not the material items you possess, but the feelings you give yourself in darker times. Now you may think, “You’re exaggerating” but it truly is that simple. The thoughts we convey to ourselves in our heads could be the answer we’ve all been looking for. I believe happiness is ourselves. And happiness can change the world.
I changed it so that your grammar was correct and so that it was less repetitive and easy to grasp concepts from. But overall I do really agree with you views and structure. Keep up the good work!
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I write an essay every day, but I'm not sure if it is correct or not.
My idea of perfect happiness is where everyone can say, "I'm happy.” (Alternatively, you could write, “My idea of perfect happiness is where everyone can feel happy.”) It's very simple, but these days many people consider themselves unhappy. Personally, there is no reason I should have survived my childhood. I couldn't figure out what the purpose of my life was, but my mind has changed since then. I always feel that I'm happy even if it is the worst day in my entire life. That may sound like it doesn't make sense, but it is important to believe, "I'm happy.” If I do that, my feelings towards life get much better. (Instead of “...my feelings towards life get much better,” you could say, “...my mindset gets much better.”) It took a long time to change my mind, however, if everyone on the earth can feel "I'm happy,” - even though they don't have enough money, many friends, or other things - the world would change for the better. I bet some people say, "You are exaggerating,” but I really believe it, and I hope the world will become better.
I hope this helps.
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Thank you so much. I'm happy to hear that. My English is not perfect, so I'll keep this work. I appreciate you. Have a good day:)
Thank you so much. I'm happy to hear that. My English is not perfect, so I'll keep this work. I appreciate you. Have a good day:)
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