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Hi everyone! I had to write an essay on the subject of a great place to visit. Can u check it out? Immediately I thought about Japan. It is my favourite country in the whole wolrd!
First something about geographical information of this country. It’s located in the Pacific Ocean in East Asia. For this reason, it is affected by around 1500 (one and a half thousands) earthquakes annually. Japan has four main islands - Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikkoku and Kyushu – which make up about 97% of Japan’s land area.
Now I have to talk about views in this country. For nature lovers there are numerous trails, areas rich in hot springs, mountains covered with forests and temples located there, sandy shores, bays, lakes and islands surrounded by coral reef.
That place is so interesting due its culture, traditions, language and its cuisine obviously. You can see many people which are selling gadgets at the street market stalls. Animated characters are everywhere! + (comment)
Hi everyone! I had to write an essay on the subject of a great place to visit. Can u check it out? Immediately I thought about Japan. It is my favourite country in the whole wolrd!
First something about geographical information of this country. It’s located in the Pacific Ocean in East Asia. For this reason, it is affected by around 1500 (one and a half thousands) earthquakes annually. Japan has four main islands - Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikkoku and Kyushu – which make up about 97% of Japan’s land area.
Now I have to talk about views in this country. For nature lovers there are numerous trails, areas rich in hot springs, mountains covered with forests and temples located there, sandy shores, bays, lakes and islands surrounded by coral reef.
That place is so interesting due its culture, traditions, language and its cuisine obviously. You can see many people which are selling gadgets at the street market stalls. Animated characters are everywhere! + (comment)
First something about geographical information of this country. It’s located in the Pacific Ocean in East Asia. For this reason, it is affected by around 1500 (one and a half thousands) earthquakes annually. Japan has four main islands - Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikkoku and Kyushu – which make up about 97% of Japan’s land area.
Now I have to talk about views in this country. For nature lovers there are numerous trails, areas rich in hot springs, mountains covered with forests and temples located there, sandy shores, bays, lakes and islands surrounded by coral reef.
That place is so interesting due its culture, traditions, language and its cuisine obviously. You can see many people which are selling gadgets at the street market stalls. Animated characters are everywhere! + (comment)
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But your paragraph was super I wish I could go to Japan too! 😊
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+ That population really enjoy it. Also selling.. live animals strongly is drawing attention. You can buy octopus, fishes, shrimps and similar in the bags filled water and animals, naturally. It makes your homemade sushi ultra-fresh.
I really want to see this live. I can’t wait to my miracle come true!
I really want to see this live. I can’t wait to my miracle come true!
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First something about geography of this country. It’s located in the Pacific Ocean in East Asia. For this reason, it is affected by around 1500 (one and a half thousand) earthquakes annually. Japan has four main islands - Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikkoku and Kyushu; which make up about 97% of Japan’s land area.
Regarding Japan's scenery, nature lovers enjoy numerous trails, areas rich in hot springs, mountains covered with forests and temples, sandy shores, bays, lakes and islands surrounded by coral reef.
Japan is quite interesting due its culture, traditions, language and its obviously its cuisine. You can see many people that are selling gadgets at the street market stalls. Animated characters are everywhere! +
The people really enjoy it. Also selling live animals is strongly attracting attention. You can buy octopus, fish, shrimp and similar seafood in the water-filled bags, and animals, naturally. It makes your homemade sushi ultra-fresh.
I really want to see this live. I can’t wait for my miracle come true.
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@Qmeika Hi! Wow how description of Japan sounds amazing. Just a few tiny things that you forgot to add into your sentences
( One and a half thousand) the "s" is not necessary here
"That place is so interesting due "to" it's culture... " the "to" was missed out, always remember that "due to" has to have both words in otherwise it doesn't make as much sense
shrimp doesn't need an "s" to make it plural it can said as one shrimp or many shrimp
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But your paragraph was super I wish I could go to Japan too! 😊
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