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Hi! Please,check the lyrics of my song. Tell me if it sounds bad or have any grammatical mistakes.
Chorus:
Looking for the stars we fly before this happy night is out.
Looking for the light we love before this happy night is out.
Don't say happy night is out,
Moving to the beat with the crowd.

Verse:
Guys! Is this all made for us?
A new stage, is it so far?
Save your heart with no fear.

Why are you looking around?
And are all the ties neatly tied?
You’re twisting them right in the air!

Pre-chorus:
As you go, meet those who get lost through greater goals.
Uuuu what if we enjoy how it‘s going?

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Hi! Please,check the lyrics of my song. Tell me if it sounds bad or have any grammatical mistakes.
Chorus: 
Looking for the stars we fly before this happy night is out.
Looking for the light we love before this happy night is out.
Don't say happy night is out, 
Moving to the beat with the crowd.

Verse:
Guys! Is this all made for us?
A new stage, is it so far? 
Save your heart with no fear.

Why are you looking around? 
And are all the ties neatly tied?
You’re twisting them right in the air!

Pre-chorus:  
As you go, meet those who get lost through greater goals. 
Uuuu what if we enjoy how it‘s going?
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