my teacher wanted my essay to sound like a native speaker. could you help me fix the last 3 sentences. it would be so kind of you 聼起來自然嗎?

Hi. My name is Bich I’m very happy to have the opportunity
to be here and introduce myself to you.
I live in a small town which is called Băc yên.
At present, I’m a senior at Bac yen high school.
My ambition is to become a tour guide to
interact with different people and learn new things from them
so whenever I have free time, I will indulge myself in english
like reading books, listening to taylor swift songs .
Apart from that, I’m a nuts about everything related to japan.
Even though my knowledge about english isn’t good enough
but I promise myself to be better everyday.