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bb402
2020年5月27日

  • 韓語
  • 英語 (美國)
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1. I took my daughter to her school every morning.
2. Today is the day my daughter enters elementary school.
3. She got a rose at school.
4. I brought some bread but I am going to eat it later.

Can you correct the sentences? 用 英語 (美國) 要怎麼說？

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ItalianaSpaghet
2020年5月27日

  • 英語 (美國)
  • 西班牙語 (墨西哥)

1. You can omit the “the” before “school” (it is implied that it is her school)
2. “Starts” instead of “enters” sounds a bit more natural
3. Good
4. Add a pause/comma after “bread” to make it sound natural:)

Overall very good!!
Also I’m seeing some people correct “took” to “take;” if you are still taking her every day, it would be “take;” if you are talking about the past, keep it as “took.” :)

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dedee4029
2020年5月27日

  • 英語 (美國)
  • 西班牙語 (智利) 接近流利

1. I take my daughter to her school every morning.
2. It’s correct, but not natural. A more natural way to say it can be “today is the day my daughter will go to elementary school.”
3. Correct 👍
4. Correct 👍

sichengletswinwin
2020年5月27日

  • 英語 (美國)
  • 菲律賓語

I take my daughter to her school every morning.
Today is my daughter's first day in elementary.
She received a rose in school. (It would be better if you just mention who gave the rose, and not the place where the rose was given.)
4th sentence is correct!!

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1. I took my daughter to her school every morning. 2. Today is the day my daughter enters elementary school. 3. She got a rose at school. 4. I brought some bread but I am going to eat it later. Can you correct the sentences?用 英語 (美國) 要怎麼說？
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