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honghanh999
2020年7月21日

  • 越南語
  • 英語 (美國)
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Can you tell me where i wrong?

First, most of people have brag character. They like to publish picture or story on social media. Moreover, they like to have interaction from others and they use social media to waiting others interaction. And all praise or blame will bring pressure on them. Second, nearly people have envy of others. Everytime, they see a picture or story are published on social media by successful people. They tend to blame themselves and wonder: why i don't achieve it? Nowaday, the more people share ones 's story, the more others is pressured.

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amdghhhh__
2020年7月21日

  • 英語 (美國)
  • 菲律賓語 接近流利

First, most of people have brag character. They like to publish picture*(pictures) or story*(stories) on social media. Moreover, they like to have interaction*(interactions) from others and they*(<delete) use social media to waiting*(wait for) others*(others’) interaction. And all praise or blame will bring pressure on them (I’m not sure what you are trying to say in this sentence). Second, nearly*(most) people *(are) have*(<delete) envy of others. Everytime, they see a picture or story are published on social media by successful people. They tend to blame themselves and wonder: why i *(cant) don't*(<delete) achieve it? Nowaday, the more people share ones 's story, the more others is*(are) pressured.

amdghhhh__
2020年7月21日

  • 英語 (美國)
  • 菲律賓語 接近流利

First, most of people have brag character. They like to publish pictures or stories on social media. Moreover, they like to have interactions from others and use social media to wait for others’ interaction. And all praise or blame will bring pressure on them. Second, most people are envious of others. Everytime, they see a picture or story are published on social media by successful people. They tend to blame themselves and wonder: why can’t I achieve that? Nowadays, the more people share ones 's story, the more others are pressured.

honghanh999
2020年7月21日

  • 越南語
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Can you tell me where i wrong? First, most of people have brag character. They like to publish picture or story on social media. Moreover, they like to have interaction from others and they use social media to waiting others interaction. And all praise or blame will bring pressure on them. Second, nearly people have envy of others. Everytime, they see a picture or story are published on social media by successful people. They tend to blame themselves and wonder: why i don't achieve it? Nowaday, the more people share ones 's story, the more others is pressured.
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