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Cherrierr
2020年8月23日

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Lack of sleep causes that certain parts of emotional brain react inappropriately, therefore, people without enough sleep tend to be emotionally irrational and hyperreactive. Also, getting a full nights of sleep back provides people that form of emotional convalescence. It was good to know and when something bad happened, I would take a sleep right away to see if it is true.

Does it sound natural?

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MiketheJay
2020年8月23日

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Lack of sleep causes certain parts of the emotional brain TO react inappropriately. Therefore, people without enough sleep tend to be emotionally irrational and hyper-reactive. Also, getting a full night's sleep provides people with that form of emotional convalescence. This (As in the information in the previous sentences) was good to know and when something bad happened, I would got to sleep right away, to see if it is true.

This sounds a bit better in my opinion. The mixture of 'scientific' writing and your personal touch is an interesting combination, is this for a school project or research paper?

xxxilikexxxlolixxx
2020年8月23日

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Hmm. I think it sounds a bit unnatural. Here would be my version of it.

Lack of sleep causes certain emotional parts of the brain to react inappropriately. Therefore, people without enough sleep tend to be emotionally irrational and hyperreactive. However, getting a full night's sleep back provides people emotional convalescence. It is good to know this. If something bad happens, I would go to sleep right away and see if it is true.

Okay, I'm not well-versed about sleeping and the brain, but I tried. Hope it helps!

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Cherrierr
2020年8月23日

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@MiketheJay Thank you very much!
My professor gave me assignments to watch TED talk and write summary and my comment in order to improve my English :)
Cherrierr
2020年8月23日

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@xxxllollxxxlolichild Thank you very much!
So helpful:)
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Lack of sleep causes that certain parts of emotional brain react inappropriately, therefore, people without enough sleep tend to be emotionally irrational and hyperreactive. Also, getting a full nights of sleep back provides people that form of emotional convalescence. It was good to know and when something bad happened, I would take a sleep right away to see if it is true. Does it sound natural?
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