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Industrial revolution
Sodium carbonate emerges as a necessity in real life
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. The industrial revolution mass-produces cotton cloth and supplies it at low prices.
Cotton cloth came out dull gray on the loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting.
For this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England at that time depended on this rare material.
In addition, a growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda. 聼起來自然嗎?
Sodium carbonate emerges as a necessity in real life
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. The industrial revolution mass-produces cotton cloth and supplies it at low prices.
Cotton cloth came out dull gray on the loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting.
For this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England at that time depended on this rare material.
In addition, a growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda. 聼起來自然嗎?
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The Industrial revolutionRevolution
The Industrial revolutionRevolution
Sodium carbonate emerges as aan necessityindispensable tool in realthe lifetextile industry.
Sodium carbonate emerges as aan necessityindispensable tool in realthe lifetextile industry.
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. (Were all of the clothes expensive? If so, place “expensive” after “wore.” If not, consider removing it.)
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. (Were all of the clothes expensive? If so, place “expensive” after “wore.” If not, consider removing it.)
The industrial revolution allowed factories to mass-producesproduce cotton cloth and suppliessupply it to consumers at low prices.
The industrial revolution allowed factories to mass-producesproduce cotton cloth and suppliessupply it to consumers at low prices.
CottonThe cotton cloth camethat outwas dullproduced grayduring onthis theperiod loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting because natural cotton is a dull gray.
CottonThe cotton cloth camethat outwas dullproduced grayduring onthis theperiod loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting because natural cotton is a dull gray.
ForThe this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England atdepended thaton timesodium dependedcarbonate onbecause of this rareinconvenient materialfact.
ForThe this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England atdepended thaton timesodium dependedcarbonate onbecause of this rareinconvenient materialfact.
In addition, athe growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda.
In addition, athe growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda.
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The Industrial revolutionRevolution
The Industrial revolutionRevolution
Sodium carbonate emerges as aan necessityindispensable tool in realthe lifetextile industry.
Sodium carbonate emerges as aan necessityindispensable tool in realthe lifetextile industry.
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. (Were all of the clothes expensive? If so, place “expensive” after “wore.” If not, consider removing it.)
At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. (Were all of the clothes expensive? If so, place “expensive” after “wore.” If not, consider removing it.)
The industrial revolution allowed factories to mass-producesproduce cotton cloth and suppliessupply it to consumers at low prices.
The industrial revolution allowed factories to mass-producesproduce cotton cloth and suppliessupply it to consumers at low prices.
CottonThe cotton cloth camethat outwas dullproduced grayduring onthis theperiod loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting because natural cotton is a dull gray.
CottonThe cotton cloth camethat outwas dullproduced grayduring onthis theperiod loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting because natural cotton is a dull gray.
ForThe this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England atdepended thaton timesodium dependedcarbonate onbecause of this rareinconvenient materialfact.
ForThe this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England atdepended thaton timesodium dependedcarbonate onbecause of this rareinconvenient materialfact.
In addition, athe growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda.
In addition, athe growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda.
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@Suzy1404 no worries.🙏🤠 Btw, I know that another user said that it sounds natural, but it doesn’t, especially within the context of a college (yes, I know that Canadiens and Canadians always use “university” regardless of the context🤣) presentation. Take my corrections to your dean, and he or she will agree that they’re necessary. Some of the changes were stylistic choices and open to interpretation, but they’re still appropriate.)🤓
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@Suzy1404 btw, “I really appreciate for all HiNative users” -> “I really appreciate every HiNative user that answers my questions.”
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@Suzy1404 “strict feedback for correcting” -> “detailed feedback/corrections regarding my questions” Good luck with your presentation! You’ll do fine if you use soap when you take a shower!🤣🤣🤣😅😅
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