young generation goes to the park when they have some special things like picnic or relaxing
while older generation always goes to the park


I have speaking test... please correct this and make this natural 用 英語 (美國) 要怎麼說？

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“The younger generations go to the park when they want to go on a picnic or relax while older generations don’t need a reason to go to the park.”


“Younger generations go to the park on special occasions like when they want to go on a picnic or relax. Meanwhile, older generations do not need a special occasion to go to the park.”