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What things have a positive effect on me?
Each person is happy with different things, and, for me, the things that make me happy are my dogs and study korean.
Firstly, my dogs are my everything. When have a wrong day, they always be to make my day. I really know that I would give my life for they.
On the other hand, in the past, I was lost in the life. I didn't have motivation. This changed when I discovered the kpop and the kdramas. Actually I fell in love with korean culture and begin to learn Korean. This language is very beautiful.
In conclusion, in my life have many things that make me happy, nevertheless, never will be able to like my dogs and the Korean.
PLEASE Can you correct my text?? Thank uuu!!
What things have a positive effect on me?
Each person is happy with different things, and, for me, the things that make me happy are my dogs and study korean.
Firstly, my dogs are my everything. When have a wrong day, they always be to make my day. I really know that I would give my life for they.
On the other hand, in the past, I was lost in the life. I didn't have motivation. This changed when I discovered the kpop and the kdramas. Actually I fell in love with korean culture and begin to learn Korean. This language is very beautiful.
In conclusion, in my life have many things that make me happy, nevertheless, never will be able to like my dogs and the Korean.
What things have a positive effect on me?
Each person is happy with different things, and, for me, the things that make me happy are my dogs and study korean.
Firstly, my dogs are my everything. When have a wrong day, they always be to make my day. I really know that I would give my life for they.
On the other hand, in the past, I was lost in the life. I didn't have motivation. This changed when I discovered the kpop and the kdramas. Actually I fell in love with korean culture and begin to learn Korean. This language is very beautiful.
In conclusion, in my life have many things that make me happy, nevertheless, never will be able to like my dogs and the Korean.
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“dogs and to study Korean”
“Firstly, my dogs are everything to me”
“When have a bad day, they always make my day. I know that I would really give my life for them.”
“Lost in life”
“Discovered kpop and kdramas “
Always use capita K for Korea/Korean
“Began to learn Korean” because you are talking in past tense.
“In conclusion, in my life I have many things that make me happy” The rest of this sentence I do not understand. What are you trying to say? Can you say it another way?
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I made a mistake above. Should be
“Firstly, my dogs are everything to me”
Your last paragraph can be
“In conclusion, in my life I have many things that make me happy, but none of them make me as happy as my dogs and learning Korean”
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What things have a positive effect on me?
Each person /everyone* is happy with different things, and, for me, the things that make me happy are my dogs and to* study Korean.
Firstly, my dogs are everything to me*.
When I have a bad* day, they always make my day/me happy.
I know that I would give my life for them*.
On the other hand, in the past, I was lost in life.
I had no* motivation. This changed when I discovered kpop and kdramas.
Actually I fell in love with Korean culture and began* to learn Korean.
This language is very beautiful.
In conclusion, in my life I have many things that make me happy, nevertheless,
nothing will ever take the place of my dogs and the Korean culture.
:)
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