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2017年3月7日
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- 英語 (英國)
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
1. The verb right after "to" needs to be in its base form. This is because of to-infinitive grammar rule.
Reference: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/engl...
http://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-gra...
2. "which develops our body to repair decay of our body..."
That part doesn't make sense at all (although it's grammatically correct). How does "developing your body" helps to repair...? Developing your body is developing your body, repairing is repairing. There is no link.
If you want to make a link, you've to link it. i.e. which develops our body the ability to repair damaged cells and gives us strength.
3. Try not to repeat any words in a sentence.
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
A balanced diet provides us with nutrition which helps to develop our body. Repair damaged cells and give strength.
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- 英語 (英國)
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
1. The verb right after "to" needs to be in its base form. This is because of to-infinitive grammar rule.
Reference: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/engl...
http://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-gra...
2. "which develops our body to repair decay of our body..."
That part doesn't make sense at all (although it's grammatically correct). How does "developing your body" helps to repair...? Developing your body is developing your body, repairing is repairing. There is no link.
If you want to make a link, you've to link it. i.e. which develops our body the ability to repair damaged cells and gives us strength.
3. Try not to repeat any words in a sentence.
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@XPMai I am mesmerised. You gave a lucid explanation. Anyway Could you do a small favour for me?
- 英語 (英國)
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
@rayhan99999 Are you able to select answer as Featured Answer? It's uncommon for me and I never got to use it.
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