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Question: A new coronavirus spread in 2020, what can be done to prevent the spread of such infections in the future?
There are some solutions to prevent the spread of infectious disease like the novel coronavirus. Countries should copy other countries’ strategy.
To begin with, shortly after a novel virus spreads in other countries, government should implement immigration restrictions of visitors from other countries, like Taiwan did this time.
Moreover, government should enforce a law that prohibits people from going out, like in New Zealand. It is because there is no such laws in Japan now and the government has declared a state of emergency several times, but some people have ignored it and often hang out.
I would like you to correct my essay.
Question: A new coronavirus spread in 2020, what can be done to prevent the spread of such infections in the future?
There are some solutions to prevent the spread of infectious disease like the novel coronavirus. Countries should copy other countries’ strategy.
To begin with, shortly after a novel virus spreads in other countries, government should implement immigration restrictions of visitors from other countries, like Taiwan did this time.
Moreover, government should enforce a law that prohibits people from going out, like in New Zealand. It is because there is no such laws in Japan now and the government has declared a state of emergency several times, but some people have ignored it and often hang out.
Question: A new coronavirus spread in 2020, what can be done to prevent the spread of such infections in the future?
There are some solutions to prevent the spread of infectious disease like the novel coronavirus. Countries should copy other countries’ strategy.
To begin with, shortly after a novel virus spreads in other countries, government should implement immigration restrictions of visitors from other countries, like Taiwan did this time.
Moreover, government should enforce a law that prohibits people from going out, like in New Zealand. It is because there is no such laws in Japan now and the government has declared a state of emergency several times, but some people have ignored it and often hang out.
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There are solutions to prevent the spread of such infectious disease like the Novel Coronavirus. One way is by starting to copy other countries' strategies againsts the said virus. For example, when the virus starts to spread in other countries, the government should start preventing tourists, visitors or immigrants just like what the Taiwanese government did in their country.
Moreover, the government should also enforce policies which prohibits the people from going out like what the government in New Zealand did. This is due to the reason that Japan does not have such policies today and the government declared state of emergencies several times yet the people are ignoring it and still hanging out outside.
This is not much of a correction more like a suggestion. I hope it helps. :)
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