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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
They would like to invite the/a customer on a factory tour, and so the appearance of the machines has become one of the deciding factors for giving the tour.
I added the/a because it's a "count" noun
I used machines because unit could also refer to staff. Machines sounds less ambiguous. Also based on you sentence in Japanese, I think this word fits better.
'Deciding factor' is a simpler way of saying factor for decision
I added "for giving the tour" to provide clarification on what decision is being made based on the appearance of the machines.
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
They would like to invite the/a customer on a factory tour, and so the appearance of the machines has become one of the deciding factors for giving the tour.
I added the/a because it's a "count" noun
I used machines because unit could also refer to staff. Machines sounds less ambiguous. Also based on you sentence in Japanese, I think this word fits better.
'Deciding factor' is a simpler way of saying factor for decision
I added "for giving the tour" to provide clarification on what decision is being made based on the appearance of the machines.
- 日語
Thank you for your correction! =D

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