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Could you correct mistakes in my speech draft?
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topic: Are current agricultural practices sustainable?
I don’t think current agriculture practices are sustainable. Here are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is global warming. Global warming changes environment negatively. Higher temperature causes more droughts and water shortages, which damages traditional farm lands. This means the way of current agriculture should be changed.
The second reason is the development of genetically modified crops. The study of genetically modified crops have been accelerated by multinational corporations and governments because they are strong, cheap, and efficient. Therefore, eventually, old agricultural styles will be undermined by mass production of GM crops in the near future.
In conclusion, for the two reasons I mentioned, I should say agriculture will be monopolised by GM crops in the future.
Hi!
Could you correct mistakes in my speech draft?
————
topic: Are current agricultural practices sustainable?
I don’t think current agriculture practices are sustainable. Here are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is global warming. Global warming changes environment negatively. Higher temperature causes more droughts and water shortages, which damages traditional farm lands. This means the way of current agriculture should be changed.
The second reason is the development of genetically modified crops. The study of genetically modified crops have been accelerated by multinational corporations and governments because they are strong, cheap, and efficient. Therefore, eventually, old agricultural styles will be undermined by mass production of GM crops in the near future.
In conclusion, for the two reasons I mentioned, I should say agriculture will be monopolised by GM crops in the future.
Could you correct mistakes in my speech draft?
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topic: Are current agricultural practices sustainable?
I don’t think current agriculture practices are sustainable. Here are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is global warming. Global warming changes environment negatively. Higher temperature causes more droughts and water shortages, which damages traditional farm lands. This means the way of current agriculture should be changed.
The second reason is the development of genetically modified crops. The study of genetically modified crops have been accelerated by multinational corporations and governments because they are strong, cheap, and efficient. Therefore, eventually, old agricultural styles will be undermined by mass production of GM crops in the near future.
In conclusion, for the two reasons I mentioned, I should say agriculture will be monopolised by GM crops in the future.
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2021年11月7日
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I don’t think current agricultural practices are sustainable. Here are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is due to global warming. Global warming negatively affects the environment. Higher temperatures cause more frequent droughts and water shortages, which in turn damages traditional farm lands. This means that we should change our current practices.
The second reason is due to the development of genetically modified crops. Studies of genetically modified crops have been accelerated by multinational corporations and governments because they are strong, cheap, and efficient. Therefore, eventually, old agricultural styles will be undermined by the mass production of GM crops in the near future.
In conclusion, for the two reasons I mentioned above, I believe that current agricultural are not sustainable and that the agriculture industry will be monopolised by GM crops in the future.
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- 英語 (美國)
I don’t think current agricultural practices are sustainable. Here are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is due to global warming. Global warming negatively affects the environment. Higher temperatures cause more frequent droughts and water shortages, which in turn damages traditional farm lands. This means that we should change our current practices.
The second reason is due to the development of genetically modified crops. Studies of genetically modified crops have been accelerated by multinational corporations and governments because they are strong, cheap, and efficient. Therefore, eventually, old agricultural styles will be undermined by the mass production of GM crops in the near future.
In conclusion, for the two reasons I mentioned above, I believe that current agricultural are not sustainable and that the agriculture industry will be monopolised by GM crops in the future.
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