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2015年10月31日
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I think most of it sounds pretty good. I would just change it a little bit to: "Without proper administration (no comma) the river is contaminated with industrial chemicals, which engenders health concerns (concerns - should be plural because each villager has a health concern and there are many villagers. So there is more than just one concern) for the villagers. "
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
first half of the sentence is good, but the second half can be summed up as: "...which endangers the village."
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- 英語 (美國)
- 西班牙語 (墨西哥)
有點不自然
I think most of it sounds pretty good. I would just change it a little bit to: "Without proper administration (no comma) the river is contaminated with industrial chemicals, which engenders health concerns (concerns - should be plural because each villager has a health concern and there are many villagers. So there is more than just one concern) for the villagers. "
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