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- 英語 (英國)
自然
It's good English, but a bit difficult to follow. I would rearrange:
"...in their personal and professional lives due to their social skills."
'due to' just makes it clear that it's an impact of this.
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How’s this?
Coaching helps people maximize their potential and overcome their fears through a thought-provoking and creative communicating methods.
How’s this?
Coaching helps people maximize their potential and overcome their fears through a thought-provoking and creative communicating methods.
- 英語 (英國)
自然
Remember that 'a' refers to something singular (single) but then 'methods' is plural (multiple) so it doesn't make sense.
I think you changed the original sentence? I really liked that one.
"Coaching allows people to develop their skills, maximise their potential, and aid both personal and professional lives due to their social skills."
"+It can also help build their confidence through different methods of communicating (with those around them.)"
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