There are many azaleas blooming after the season of cherry blossom.and then It’s a beautiful greenery. Many people visit to the park is close to my house in middle of may every year,because of it’s famous for many kind of rose. 聽起來自然嗎?

2022年5月1日

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英語 (英國)

有點不自然

~~There~~Many ~~are many~~ azaleas ~~blooming~~bloom after the ~~season of~~ cherry blossom season~~.and~~, ~~then~~followed ~~It’s~~by a beautiful greenery.

Many people visit to the park is close to my house in the middle of ~~may~~May every year, because of it’s is famous for having many ~~kind~~different kinds of ~~rose~~roses.

I would probably change the second “Many” to “A lot of”, as stylistically it is better not to repeat words in English if possible (unless it is done deliberately for literary effect or emphasis).

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2022年5月1日

英語 (英國)

有點不自然

~~There~~Many ~~are many~~ azaleas ~~blooming~~bloom after the ~~season of~~ cherry blossom season~~.and~~, ~~then~~followed ~~It’s~~by a beautiful greenery.

Many people visit to the park is close to my house in the middle of ~~may~~May every year, because of it’s is famous for having many ~~kind~~different kinds of ~~rose~~roses.

I would probably change the second “Many” to “A lot of”, as stylistically it is better not to repeat words in English if possible (unless it is done deliberately for literary effect or emphasis).