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Does this sound natural? What other words to replace “come down to the ground” will be?
“I climbed up to the top of the tree, but then when I tried to come back to the ground, I couldn’t move my body at all. so i was worried sick and tearing my hair out trying to come down. But then suddenly, a voice of a girl was heared. It was from a little girl and she calmly assured me I would be fine. I took a breath as she advised me to do so and take a small step until I got finally my feet back to the ground.”
Does this sound natural? What other words to replace “come down to the ground” will be?
“I climbed up to the top of the tree, but then when I tried to come back to the ground, I couldn’t move my body at all. so i was worried sick and tearing my hair out trying to come down. But then suddenly, a voice of a girl was heared. It was from a little girl and she calmly assured me I would be fine. I took a breath as she advised me to do so and take a small step until I got finally my feet back to the ground.”
“I climbed up to the top of the tree, but then when I tried to come back to the ground, I couldn’t move my body at all. so i was worried sick and tearing my hair out trying to come down. But then suddenly, a voice of a girl was heared. It was from a little girl and she calmly assured me I would be fine. I took a breath as she advised me to do so and take a small step until I got finally my feet back to the ground.”
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- 英語 (英國)
“I climbed up to the top of the tree. But then, when I tried to climb down, I couldn’t move my body at all. I was worried sick, tearing my hair out trying to come down. Then suddenly, I could hear a girl’s voice. A young girl who calmly assured me I would be fine. I took a breath like she advised me to and took a small step until finally my feet were back on the ground.”
- Your writing worked well but it wasn’t the most natural. I can explain any changes if needed
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- 英語 (英國)
“I climbed up to the top of the tree. But then, when I tried to climb down, I couldn’t move my body at all. I was worried sick, tearing my hair out trying to come down. Then suddenly, I could hear a girl’s voice. A young girl who calmly assured me I would be fine. I took a breath like she advised me to and took a small step until finally my feet were back on the ground.”
- Your writing worked well but it wasn’t the most natural. I can explain any changes if needed
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Thank you! But in this sentence you’ve corrected: “A young girl who calmly assured me I would be fine.”, “who” should be omitted, right?
- 韓語
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And isn’t it correct to just say “I heared a girl’s voice” without “could”?
- 英語 (英國)
Who and could can be omitted if you want. Both words just make the sentences more fancy and storytelling like. You are able to omit this words without changing the meaning of the sentence.
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Ah I thought adding who in this sentence would be grammatically incorrect cos some adjectives or other descriptions like them should be followed by who if that makes sense
- 英語 (英國)
I understand, the English language is complicated some times. The rules for certain words changes for no apparent reason.
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