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I have just received a letter from my brother Tim. He is a engineer, and now, working in Australian for six month. For the sake of trip, Tim bought a car. He has visited a great number of places here. Such as Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australian,Tim just visited last week. And he plans to Darwin in July, from there, he will fly to Perth. “Every single trip make me excited though i have been so many place in Australian.” Tim said “i think that is because it’s my first time live in abroad.”
could someone please help me to correct this paragraph？thanks！
I have just received a letter from my brother Tim. He is a engineer, and now, working in Australian for six month. For the sake of trip, Tim bought a car. He has visited a great number of places here. Such as Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australian,Tim just visited last week. And he plans to Darwin in July, from there, he will fly to Perth. “Every single trip make me excited though i have been so many place in Australian.” Tim said “i think that is because it’s my first time live in abroad.”
I have just received a letter from my brother Tim. He is a engineer, and now, working in Australian for six month. For the sake of trip, Tim bought a car. He has visited a great number of places here. Such as Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australian,Tim just visited last week. And he plans to Darwin in July, from there, he will fly to Perth. “Every single trip make me excited though i have been so many place in Australian.” Tim said “i think that is because it’s my first time live in abroad.”
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I have just received a letter from my brother Tim. He is an engineer, and is currently working in Australia for six months. Tim bought a car for the trip. He has visited a great number of places there such as Alice Springs, a small town in the centre of Australia which Tim just visited last week. He also plans to go to Darwin in July and from there, he will fly to Perth. “Every single trip makes me excited even though I have been to so many place in Australia.” Tim said, “I think that is because it’s my first time living abroad.”
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