Does this sound natural?
´´Amelia and the group of tourists had just reached the famous Egyptian pyramides when they heard a loud scream. ´´Did you hear that´´- one of the tourist asked to Amelia. ´´Yes, I did´´, Amelia replied. ´´Maybe it´s just a kid crying´´, she added. However, seconds later, they heard that mysterious scream one more time but nobody knew form where it came. What it could be?...
A cuople of hours later, Amelia and the group of tourists were having lunch in a canteen near the pyramides. Out of the blue, the scream that they heard at the pyramides was heard again! They were absolutely petrified. ´´It must be Pharaoh´s spirit that is annoyed with us, run for your life´´- one of the touristes screamed.´´Oh, come on! Don´t be stupid´´- Amelia told him! As she was tired of what was going on, Amelia gave a call to the tour guide and told him the issue. Laughing loud, the tour guide told her to no worry about it at all because it was his pet, a mischievous parrot that liked to scare people by screaming like a dinosaur! What a surprise for Amelia and what a surprise for everyone! Wierd things that only happen in Egypt.

CONTEXT: It´s a story.

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