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leop69
2022年10月1日

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He began his career as a body builder and enjoyed his best career as a movie star and later became a governor of Califonia. I like SF movies and among them, I like Terminator2 the most. In the movie he showed strong performance with a muscular body. 用 英語 (美國) 要怎麼說？

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OldGringo
2022年10月1日

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Excellent, like usual! I would move one ",", and change one expression:
"I like SF movies, and among them I like Terminator2 the most."
"In the movie he 'gave a' strong performance with a muscular body."

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He began his career as a body builder and enjoyed his best career as a movie star and later became a governor of Califonia. I like SF movies and among them, I like Terminator2 the most. In the movie he showed strong performance with a muscular body.用 英語 (美國) 要怎麼說？
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