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yuu6
2022年11月18日

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What I found by doing a patrol is that the street in this city at night is darker than I expected and more potentially dangerous than it seemed. Therefore, it is better to keep doing patrol in the city at night.

Is my passage grammatically correct and does it sound natural??😊😂
If not, could you please correct it??😉😭

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paulf9765
2022年11月18日

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I would probably say "the streets in this city at night are darker ..." Also, "keep doing patrols". And maybe "potentially more dangerous"

otherwise, great!

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yuu6
2022年11月18日

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@paulf9765
Oh, I understand!!😭✨✨✨

Thank you very much for your helpful correction!!😊♪♪♪
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What I found by doing a patrol is that the street in this city at night is darker than I expected and more potentially dangerous than it seemed. Therefore, it is better to keep doing patrol in the city at night. Is my passage grammatically correct and does it sound natural??😊😂 If not, could you please correct it??😉😭
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