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Technology and traditional education

Are books being replaced by technology? Is learning online better than the traditional education? Now it’s very common to listen that questions, especially with the big offer of virtual courses and the facilities that it includes. However, there are more facts to take account in that. It´s possible to have a completely learning process using just your cellphone?
In order to answer all of that questions, it´s important to have a little idea of the evolution that the education have had trough the history. In the past, people used violence as the ‘’perfect method’’ to make other people learn. A lot of pedagogies began to postulate their theories and people began to change step by step the concept of education. The violence was just past and the most important thing became the integral formation of children. Games, activities and things that were essential to develop creatively was the basis of the education in early ages. Then, people used books as the basis of everything, but sometimes it makes the learning process slow and more difficult.
Moreover, with the advances of technology a lot of things became easier but keeping children focus on something also became more difficult. People could get a lot of information in just few seconds but they began to be lazier too.
On the other hand, technology offered different tools to learn and making it easy to people who haven´t much time or money to take courses in an academy. It helps a lot and introduce a new way of learning. It was interesting, and some people loved it instead some people that thought that it couldn´t replace traditional education.
Virtual learning is very useful and it can be as efficient as a traditional class, using it in a responsibility way and with the seriously that it requires. Which it´s better? It depends on the facilities and personal situations of each person.

Technology and traditional education

Are books being replaced by technology? Is learning online better than traditional education? Now that question is very common, especially with the growing offerings of virtual courses and the facilities that they include. However, there are more facts to take account than that. Is it possible to have a complete learning process using just your cellphone?
In order to answer all of those questions, it's important to have a little idea of the evolution that education has had through history. In the past, people used violence as the ‘’perfect method’’ to make other people learn. A lot of pedagogies began to postulate their theories and people began to change step by step the concept of education. The violence was in the past and the most integral thing became the formation of children. Games, activities and things that were essential to develop creativity were the basis of the education in early ages. Then, people used books as the basis of everything, but sometimes it makes the learning process slow and more difficult.
Moreover, with the advances of technology a lot of things became easier but keeping children focused on something also became more difficult. People could get a lot of information in just few seconds but they began to be lazier too.
On the other hand, technology offered different tools to learn and making it easy for people who don't have much time or money to take courses in an academy. It helps a lot and introduce a new way of learning. It was interesting, and some people loved it instead some people that thought that it couldn´t replace traditional education.
Virtual learning is very useful and it can be as efficient as a traditional class, using it in a responsible way and with the seriousness that it requires. Which is better? It depends on the facilities and personal situations of each person.

Note: A lot of your contractions are the right words, but you changed their order to combine them, and that isn't allowed. Careful of verb tenses and keeping track of what is plural and singular.

Good job, this is better than a lot of native speakers' essays that I've read!