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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there is no denying the fact that the climate change represents the major aim of our daily life. Some people argue that we should have to learn to live with it, this essay disagrees with this statement because I believe that we still have time to tackle this issue trough, for example, some laws imposed by Governmets and through the development of some new technologies.

First and foremost something to bear in mind is the fact that there are some measures that Governments could carry out to reduce the Green House effects such as imposed some laws to the industry sector in order to reduce the air pollution that generate their factories. For example, in some European countries, there are some factories that their chimneys only can run on odd days and this helps to decrease the fumes that emit their machinery.

On the other hand, there are many people and many companies that are development new technologies in order to improve and decrease the factors responsible for the climate change. For instance, there is one company called "New-paper" that is carrying out a new project to reduce the deforestation, in fact, to reduce the use of trees to create paper. This company has invented a product that is very similar to paper and is environmentally friendly.

In conclusion, those that argue that there is nothing to do to try to reduce the climate change are very wrong because there are still some things that Governments and individuals can do to make progress in the reduction of Green House effects.