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I'm going to a college in Canada after I finish an ESL program. And I think I should work on weekends while I study at the college because I will need in more money and work-experience to have better life there. 聼起來自然嗎?
I'm going to a college in Canada after I finish an ESL program. And I think I should work on weekends while I study at the college because I will need in more money and work-experience to have better life there. 聼起來自然嗎?
I'm going to take an ESL program. after that, I will take a course in college to get a better job.
I'd like to let my agency know, that I think I should work while I study.
I'd like to let my agency know, that I think I should work while I study.
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Pretty close! Just a few minor changes:
Instead of "I will need in", just say "I will need". Work experience doesn't need to be hyphenated, it's just two separate words. And say "a better life".
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