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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
*two Japanese singers/stars
*they are a married couple
*It's amazing <doesn't need a comma afterward
*There are 7 women and 9 men soloist.
*many Japanese stars
*I want to tell foreigners
Good job! Your handwriting is really cute!!
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- 英語 (美國)
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
*two Japanese singers/stars
*they are a married couple
*It's amazing <doesn't need a comma afterward
*There are 7 women and 9 men soloist.
*many Japanese stars
*I want to tell foreigners
Good job! Your handwriting is really cute!!
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
"means ' congratulations!' in German
Austria is a country known for its music and art.
The Vienna State Opera was completed in 1869.
It has 147 years of music history. For example, there is a Japanese musician couple that play(ed)(they are also soloist).
This is truly amazing because it is not easy to be a soloist ;3. At the Vienna State Opera, There are 7 female soloist and 9 male soloist.
I'm so glad to find out that there are many Japanese who work abroad. I want to be like them someday. That is why I want to study English very hard. I also want to study Japanese history so I can teach Foreigners about Japan.
Wish me luck!"
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
"They are married couple and they are soloist. It's amazing, because it isn't easy to be soloist."
should be: "They are a married couple and they are soloists. It's amazing, because it isn't easy to be a soloist."
"I want to tell foreigner about Japan."
should be: "I want to tell foreigners about Japan."
It sounds a bit unnatural but it is readable.
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
@AMeiT First, I want to say I hope you achieve your dreams of living abroad because I also share your dream.
Second, your paper is very nice, but I feel like you're still using the Japanese style of paragraphs (段落)
https://jalt.org/pansig/2004/HTML/KimKon.htm
I suggest you read this article. It explains the difference in Japanese paragraphs and English paragraphs
頑張ってね!
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- 英語 (美國)
- 日語
@sutehk: Thank you!!😁I'll keep that in mind🙋
- 日語
@beautifulxstar: They are ballet dancer, so I can write ”two Japanese dancers”??
and I'm not want to say many Japanese ”stars”☹️
I want to say many Japanese people who are active many kinds of fields! It isn't only about ballet dancers! For example, doctors, singers and actors!😁
Can you understand that I want to say?😅
and I'm not want to say many Japanese ”stars”☹️
I want to say many Japanese people who are active many kinds of fields! It isn't only about ballet dancers! For example, doctors, singers and actors!😁
Can you understand that I want to say?😅
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
@AMeiT: defiantly! You can talk about a specific occupation when you mention ethnicity! Ex: "The Persian Doctor. The Mexican fisherman. The Chinese clerk."
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@beautifulxstar: So… I can write Japanese ”stars” ??
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
@AMeiT: Yes! You can also say dancers or anything else you would like to.
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@beautifulxstar: Okay!😁👌Thank you soooo much for helping!
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