I'm creating my English CV and could use some help with it :) This is the most difficult part and I'd like to know if there is anything wrong with it. Any opinions about any mistakes (stylistic, grammar etc) are welcome. So here it goes:

I love English and constantly develop my English skills. I have good verbal and written communication skills and have no problems communicating with native speakers (I have extensive experience of such communications). I can freely
read technical documentation. And in my spare time I enjoy watching series in English, reading books and browsing the English written Web

I'm easy to communicate with and friendly person. So positive and productive work environment is very important for me. Enjoying and feeling comfortable inside the team I work with is something I always try to achieve and I'm absolutely ready to change myself if needed

I have substantial experience of communications with clients including technical support, consulting and technical specifications implementations

I'm able to solve problems myself and not to give up. Web-development is full of difficulties and that is one of the reasons I enjoy doing it and learning it

Responsibilities and agreements are the #1 priority to me. It's unacceptable for me to break them, to betray people who rely on me

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I'm creating my English CV and could use some help with it :) This is the most difficult part and I'd like to know if there is anything wrong with it. Any opinions about any mistakes (stylistic, grammar etc) are welcome. So here it goes:

I love English and constantly develop my English skills. I have good verbal and written communication skills and have no problems communicating with native speakers (I have extensive experience of such communications). I can freely
read technical documentation. And in my spare time I enjoy watching series in English, reading books and browsing the English written Web

I'm easy to communicate with and friendly person. So positive and productive work environment is very important for me. Enjoying and feeling comfortable inside the team I work with is something I always try to achieve and I'm absolutely ready to change myself if needed

I have substantial experience of communications with clients including technical support, consulting and technical specifications implementations

I'm able to solve problems myself and not to give up. Web-development is full of difficulties and that is one of the reasons I enjoy doing it and learning it

Responsibilities and agreements are the #1 priority to me. It's unacceptable for me to break them, to betray people who rely on me

pphimnara11 · Accepted Answer

I'm being nitpicky here okay?
1.extensive experienceS
2.technical documentation is awkward
3.don't start a sentence with and.
4.english written web??
5.and A friendly person
6.shouldn't start a sentence with so, you should fuse the previous sentence with the second sentence.
7.so A positive and A productive
8.inside a team would be better
9.communication no s
10.better to end sentence there and start with this includes.....
11.Not to give up is awkward so without giving up would be better.
12.I enjoy it would be enough(including the doing it and learning it is a bit unnatural)
I see that you know a lot of vocabulary, which is good. Sometimes, you leave out "a" which disrupts the flow of the paragraph. I think in the end, you should have a concluding sentence to wrap everything up. Good luck!

itnnguyen · Answer

I think you're doing very well. But I feel that you can improve your grammar, allowing your sentences to flow and transition better. Overall, to improve, you should work on making your sentences flow and that they are organized.

DysHaze · Answer

You are doing a great job with learning English. There are a few iffy spots for example when you said "I'm easy to communicate with and friendly person" it doesn't sound right. You could try "I am a friendly person and I am easy to communicate with." 
With a little more practice I would probably think English was your first language haha. It's a difficult language to perfect, but with time I'm sure you will get it. Have a nice day/night.

RebeccaK0682 · Answer

I love English and constantly develop my English skills. I have good verbal and written communication skills and have no problems communicating with native speakers (I have extensive experience with such communication). I can freely
read technical documentation. In my spare time, I enjoy watching films in English, reading books and browsing the internet in English.

I'm easy to communicate with and a friendly person, so a positive and productive work environment is very important for me. Enjoying and feeling comfortable with the team I work with is something I always try to achieve, and I'm absolutely open to change.

I have substantial experience with communication with clients, including technical support, consulting and the implementation of technical specifications.

I am able to solve problems myself and do not give up. Web-development is full of difficulties, and that is one of the reasons I enjoy doing it and learning more about it.

Responsibilities and agreements are a priority for me. It is unacceptable for me to break them, and I am always diligent with the people who rely on me.

gomesjs127 · Answer

あなたの名前は何ですか

pphimnara11 · Answer

@glaux thing is, I'm not familiar with your field of work so I'm not sure about some of the vocabulary so you may be right. As for "a" its just a general rule and putting it there is required. As for inside a team, it is better than "the" because "the"means that there is only one specific team, "the" only team. I'm sure that you would encounter many teams, so "a", a less specific article would be much more natural!

I think you're doing very well. But I feel that you can improve your grammar, allowing your sentences to flow and transition better. Overall, to improve, you should work on making your sentences flow and that they are organized.

あなたの名前は何ですか

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