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I'm an assistant manager at the corporate risk management division. My team is 7 members. I've been working with them for 2 years. I measure market risk and analyze it once a month. I'm also in charge of preparing ALM committee. I feel excited about my job.

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@Hirokan I'm an assistant manager at the Corporate Risk Management Division. My team HAS seven members. I've been working with them for two years. I assess market risks and analyze it once a month. I'm also in charge of preparing ALM committee. I feel excited about my job. / I enjoy my job.



take note of capitalizations and numbers one to nine should be spelled out in formal writing. :)