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Let’s stick together. Just a little bit more.
We believe that a tiny change in life, can make people become closer. While you are talking our product with other people, you may be surprised to find a lot more fun topics with them. That's the reason why we design our products. 聼起來自然嗎?
Let’s stick together. Just a little bit more.
We believe that a tiny change in life, can make people become closer. While you are talking our product with other people, you may be surprised to find a lot more fun topics with them. That's the reason why we design our products. 聼起來自然嗎?
We believe that a tiny change in life, can make people become closer. While you are talking our product with other people, you may be surprised to find a lot more fun topics with them. That's the reason why we design our products. 聼起來自然嗎?
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有點不自然
"Let's stick together. Just a little bit more." Sounds weird if you're trying to sell someone something, which is what it seems like you're doing here. Maybe say "stay and listen and you'll be surprised" to get them to stay with you.
"We believe that a tiny change in someone's life can help people become closer. When talking about our product with others, you may be surprised to find how much you all have in common. That's why we make our product."
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有點不自然
Let's stick together just a little bit more. We believe that a tiny change in life can make people become even closer. While you are using out product with other people, you may be surprised to find a lot more fun topics inside. That is the reason why we design our products.
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@JacobGoldis hi，I mean while you are talking about our product with other people，you may find a lot more fun topics. I want to say our product can make people become closer and we have unique design. Can you help me fix my text？I know it is not that natural.
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- 中文 (簡體)
有點不自然
Let’s stick together just a little bit more.
We believe that a tiny change in life can make people become closer. While you are selling/advertising our products to other people, you may be surprised to find many topics that are fun to chat about. That's the reason why we design our products.
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有點不自然
"Let's stick together. Just a little bit more." Sounds weird if you're trying to sell someone something, which is what it seems like you're doing here. Maybe say "stay and listen and you'll be surprised" to get them to stay with you.
"We believe that a tiny change in someone's life can help people become closer. When talking about our product with others, you may be surprised to find how much you all have in common. That's why we make our product."
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@Kristi112 Hello，Thank you so much for your reply. I am a brand sticker maker. “Let's sticke together. Just a little bit more” is our brand slogan. Thank you so much for your advice. That is really helpful.👍
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
In that case it probably works to use it as a slogan.
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
I have several suggestions to make your English version more professional:
We here at [company/brand name] believe that a tiny change in life can cause people to gravitate towards one another. Our product, ____, can help draw people to your cause. Our mission is to connect people, this is what drives us to design our products. Let's stick together. Just a little bit more.
I don't have the full context of what you are trying to advertise, this is the best I can do without full context. I hope this helps :)
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