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chamchimayo
2017年9月13日

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Also, I worked in a Navy as a petty officer for 4 years. I can proudly say I have more responsibility than other applicants. For 4years in the navy, I learned many things such as communication, challenge, collaboration, etc. What I mostly learn in navy is Responsibility. Responsibility can be applied everywhere, and a sense of responsibility is the driving for behind me

is it natural? if not, could you fix it please?

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RedVelvet2
2017年9月13日

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"What I mostly learnt in the Navy is responsibility. Responsibility can be applied everywhere and the sense of responsibility is the driving force behind me."

Don't use capital letters in between unless it's a place or name. Hope this helped. :)

You're English is good. :)

RedVelvet2
2017年9月13日

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@chamchimayo No problem. Anytime :)

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Also, I worked in a Navy as a petty officer for 4 years. I can proudly say I have more responsibility than other applicants. For 4years in the navy, I learned many things such as communication, challenge, collaboration, etc. What I mostly learn in navy is Responsibility. Responsibility can be applied everywhere, and a sense of responsibility is the driving for behind me is it natural? if not, could you fix it please?
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