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September sales was tough due to the hurricanes. A lot of cars were damaged and needed to be replaced, but the customers had to wait for their checks from their insurance company to buy new or preowned vehicles. In latter half of the month, we saw a bit increase in sales, however, it was not enough to hit the objectives. We lowered the sales targets for each stores to motivate them and maximize the sales this month. Also, we checked websites of each stores to ensure they did advertisements appropriately. 聼起來自然嗎?
September sales was tough due to the hurricanes. A lot of cars were damaged and needed to be replaced, but the customers had to wait for their checks from their insurance company to buy new or preowned vehicles. In latter half of the month, we saw a bit increase in sales, however, it was not enough to hit the objectives. We lowered the sales targets for each stores to motivate them and maximize the sales this month. Also, we checked websites of each stores to ensure they did advertisements appropriately. 聼起來自然嗎?
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September sales were tough due to the hurricanes. A lot of cars were damaged and needed to be replaced, but the customers had to wait for the checks from their insurance company to buy new or preowned vehicles. In the latter half of the month, we saw a bit of an increase in sales, however, it was not enough to hit the objectives. We lowered the sales targets for each of the stores to motivate them and maximize the sales this month. Also, we checked websites of each of the stores to ensure that they did advertisements appropriately.
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September sales were tough due to the hurricanes. A lot of cars were damaged and needed to be replaced, but the customers had to wait for the checks from their insurance company to buy new or preowned vehicles. In the latter half of the month, we saw a bit of an increase in sales, however, it was not enough to hit the objectives. We lowered the sales targets for each of the stores to motivate them and maximize the sales this month. Also, we checked websites of each of the stores to ensure that they did advertisements appropriately.
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