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niranana
2017年10月11日

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I had so much fun today. it is so tired. i just got back from an event. everyone looks so beautiful and cool. the event finished late, so after the event end, of course everyone wants to take picture making memories while i just quickly go home.

does it sound OK? please check the grammar and if my sentences sound weird or need some corrections, please do correct and i am really appreciate that
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JoeAnglais
2017年10月11日

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‎I had so much fun today. I AM so tired, I’ve just got back from an event. Everyone looks so beautiful and cool. The event finished late, so after the event FINISHED everyone wants to take pictures and make memories, while i just WANT TO quickly go home.

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I had so much fun today. it is so tired. i just got back from an event. everyone looks so beautiful and cool. the event finished late, so after the event end, of course everyone wants to take picture making memories while i just quickly go home.
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