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Despite the rapid growth in house price and the consistent rise in household income, the average household wealth has declined over the same period. Table 6 reveals a steady decline in homeownership rates over the period, with a fall of 3.9%. 聼起來自然嗎?
Despite the rapid growth in house price and the consistent rise in household income, the average household wealth has declined over the same period. Table 6 reveals a steady decline in homeownership rates over the period, with a fall of 3.9%. 聼起來自然嗎?
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@naa It's pretty good. I'll just tweak very gently...
Despite the rapid growth in house price and the consistent rise in household income, average household wealth has declined over the same period. Table 6 reveals a steady decline in home ownership rates over the period, with a fall of 3.9%.
House price is OK, and you can actually take more "the"s out, but it's not a problem.
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@fhg96: Thank you !:)
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@naa It's pretty good. I'll just tweak very gently...
Despite the rapid growth in house price and the consistent rise in household income, average household wealth has declined over the same period. Table 6 reveals a steady decline in home ownership rates over the period, with a fall of 3.9%.
House price is OK, and you can actually take more "the"s out, but it's not a problem.
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@Igirisujin: Great! Thank you very much! 🙆😇
I changed the "fall" into "drop" to avoid the essay being repetitive.. hahaha
I changed the "fall" into "drop" to avoid the essay being repetitive.. hahaha
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